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Thor;;
Jul 21, 2011 11:14:32 GMT -10
Post by ambird on Jul 21, 2011 11:14:32 GMT -10
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Name | Thor
Gender | Tom
Age | 23 moons
Rank | Loner
Clan | None
Beliefs | From Thor's upbringing, he does not believe that their departed ancestor's hold any sort of power once past this life. This is just a silly type of religion that has been concocted to explain the Clans rules and ranking system. In all actuality, he believes that one you pass from this Earth, you spirit is sent to another realm, and you life out your life as you did alive. Unless, of course, you were a foul spirit and deserved punishment. Then, you should go where you rightfully belong, a place no cat wished to go. He would not speak of it. Another alternative that was open to a fighter who had died bravely in battle was a place where they could be honored as fighters who had honorably sacrificed themselves for the sake of others. Thor did not expect this to be him, however. Attaching himself to those Clans....eh.
Parents | Zeus-[NP] & Isis-[NP]
Siblings | Hera-[NP] Horus-[NP] & Frigga-[NP]
Other Kin | None.
Mate | Not yet.
Crush | Not yet.
Kits | None.
Apprentice/Mentor | None.
Appearance | Having abandoned kittypet life at an early age, he became lean and fit. His build is large, and he is taller than most cats, and bulkier, as well. Thor's fur is short, and stay's that way through all of New-Leaf and Green-Leaf. Through the start of Leaf-Fall, his fur begins to slowly grow thick enough to sustain him through the colder times of the year. The main color of his fur is brown, while his left and right flanks have tabby markings. They have smaller flecks of darker brown and black, with smudges of lighter brown covering his face. His underbelly is white, with his paws being white as well. Thor's face is rounded, and his ears have smaller brown fur tips. He has short white whiskers, that often twitch at most anything. His eyes are a brighter green, and show pretty much anything and everything he's feeling at the time.
Personality | For cats who have the honor pleasure to be called his friends, he often leaves them shaking their heads at him. Thor tries to be the nicest cat he can be, but that's hard when he has the sort of pig-headed attitude he has. Along with how he believes he's the best-darned-thing since, well, ever. You see what I mean, he has a very big head at times. To describe him simply, he can bea jerk because of his ego. And, yes, sometimes you want to claw his face off because of his womanizing. Most probably want to strangle him for his self-centered beliefs that he can defeat any cat that ever lived. When it comes right down to it, however, he will be there for any cat if they need his help.
Womanizer. Getting right down to him, he likes his pretty she-cats. Not just any, however. They have to be real go-getting girls. Pansies just don't do it for him, if you know what I mean. Well, if they're pretty, can fight for themselves, and have the smarts to boot, then Thor will definitely be hitting on them. Even if he doesn't have a chance with all the stars in the sky, he'd still go after a she-cat. Besides, if you never try, will you get anywhere? Of course not! On the off chance a she-cat doesn't like him trying to get them to like him, and he annoys them....they do get a little feisty. Maybe a growl or two, but you know, she-cats will be she-cats. It's more of a challenge if they start out hating him. And without them, where would the world be? Some toms get annoyed, but Thor doesn't mind their antics. He probably annoys them, as well. He did have that certain charm. Besides, all's fair in love and war, right?
Arrogant Let's face the facts, Thor feels he is superior to pretty much anyone he meets. He's got the looks, the brains many cats would disagree on this, from what they've seen of him and that charming personality that makes him the entire package. Thor could kick your tail into the next moon, if he felt like it. He fears no one and feels certain cats should think before they speak, especially around him. His perspective at times is that he just better than every cat around him. Will he voice these opinions? What, are you deaf? Of course he will! Now, mind you, this has ended with cats wanted to claw his throat off, but, they just don't realize what he has to offer. He's obviously a great fighter, and has the scars to prove this. Thor's always good for a laugh, because, I mean, have you not seen him? He's just the life of the party, isn't he? Others would refer to him as the kill-joy that ruined it because he's such an ass at times. Those that don't agree...well they're just missing out on a great cat, aren't they?
Courageous Even with all his flaws, and he has many, Thor would still rush in to save any cat. He wouldn't care if it was a Clan cat, kittypet, or whoever. If a cat needed his help, he'd be there for them. If it looked like a fight was unfair, and he and whatever unlucky cat had ended up in this tight spot were screwed, he'd still fight them all. Win or lose. Many cats look at this as pure insanity, because he could have an entire gang of rogues on his tail and he'd still turn and face them, without even flinching at the thought of them tearing his face off. But to him, its simply Thor being able to cope in the heat of battle, and adapting to newcomers wanting to...possibly kill him. And we all know Thor, that could be a number of cats. Or a number of reasons why that would want to kill him in the first place. If a cat were to refer to him as a gutless tom with now worth, he'd put them in their place fast. Honor is something he is not without, and when a cat claims he has none, he will rebel. Thor knows where his loyalties lie. With those of true intentions, not of those who hold disbelief in anything.
Pig-Headed Sometimes, giving in to others ways is just something we all must do. That is not what Thor would do, however. He's stubborn as all get out. If he truly believes that something is the way it should be, and someone tries to tell him it isn't, he would cut them off sooner than they could blink. He remembers things clearly most of the time and when he honestly thinks something was the way he remembers, he will fight any other opinion until the sun rises. Quite a number of cats would call this sheer stupidity. What kind of cat wouldn't attempt to even give in to the suggestion that they may be wrong? Not Thor. Claiming he lies will also get you nowhere. Depending on how you phrase that, he most certainly will also grow to slowly despise you. No one likes to be an acclaimed liar, now do they? This goes back to his whole honor thing. He wouldn't be a brave cat out there without dignity. And claiming he doesn't tell the truth would be as good as plunging you teeth into his heart. Liars are not true to anything. They are foul, foul tricksters. Comparing him to that would be....ick. He just wouldn't accept your feelings and hold steady to his own. See what I mean? Stubborn.
To review, this cat tries his best to do what is right, and doesn't want anyone to hate him. But, alas, he cannot have his way until he just let's go. Once he realizes the entire world does not spin around him, and that everyone wouldn't drop dead from him gone, he may have hope of becoming a mature cat. Maturity? I scoff at this. Thor is overly confident with about just about everything, and feels he can do anything simply because well, he's him. Someone's ego couldn't be higher than his, if it was...I fear for the combined forces of those two, then. His heart is in the right place when fighting for the sake of friend's, but he can be a bit much for almost anyone. If he dialed down the stubbornness, stopped trying to woo any she-cat he met, and learned that blindly going to fight anyone wasn't a good idea, he might just become a great cat. Remember, might.
Skills | Shocking enough, because of watching from real hunters, Thor isn't half bad. If he were ever to become a Clan cat, though, he would need serious work. Coming home empty pawed just wouldn't cut it. Tracking skills could use some work, as he always seems to misplace a scent and somehow end up on the wrong side of a clearing and forget where the scent had originally even come from. Fighting? His size alone makes him an admirable warrior in that sense. Now, if he didn't rush into things without thinking, maybe he could become more than that. And, additionally fighting techniques. A Clan cat could easily withstand most of what he could throw at them. But rogue against loner? He could be on equal footing.
History | Hector and Poppy were adopted by a middle-aged couple, both from the wild. They had formerly been loners, but having had survived for so long on their own for over 30 moons, they decided the quieter life suited them better. So, what was the best option? Kittypet life. Once adopted by the kindly elderly couple they found sanctuary with, they were renamed Zeus and Isis, because the two had formerly been adventurers of sorts. Hector and her soon reverted to these names, having only acquainting themselves as kittypets, now. After all, new life, new names. It all fit together in whatever ideas they had in their heads at the time.
Well, that kind of living suited them more than loner life did. Three square meals, fresh water(granted, the different tastes did take a while to get used to) and a place to call home. What more could one ask for? The answer to that was four kittens. About 4 months into their stay, Hera, Horus, Thor and Frigga were born. Unlike some other unfortunate births, all four kits had lived through their first two moons of life and carried on from there. Horus and Hera were adored by the first two two-leg families that came in to come and adopt one of the kittens. So, by the end of the first day of the adoption process, only Frigga and Thor were left. He didn't think that being taken cared of by two-leg's sounded that fun. Sure, he was just a kit. But why not go out and explore the world? It was right out there.
His parents knowing, as parents often are, that Thor just didn't seem to fit the cookie-cutter kittypet life. Oh, don't believe for a second families weren't interested in adopting him. But, he didn't want that kind of life. So, what did he do? He made himself seem like a fuss of a kitten to deal with. His parents saw right through this, however. No punishment came for his awful behavior, though. They themselves hadn't been it from the start, either, so they knew how he felt. Both had adventured and lived life outside of a two-leg home, and if Thor felt the same way, then why stop their kit? He would go without permission, either way. Thor was just that stubborn.
Frigga, on the other hand wanted out of the elderly two-legs fur. Honestly, they were content with two cats, adding four more hadn't been on the agenda. She knew this, so she chose the easier way out. Her thoughts were this: act adorable, get some little female two-leg to adore her and then be adopted by said family. Thor thought this was ridiculous at the time. Why go through life only being a lazy cat with nothing better to live for than eating, sleeping and using that dirt filled thing to go? More could be out over that fence, couldn't it? Thor, however adventurous, knew his sister well enough, though. She was more of the homely house-cat type. Caring for others was what she did best. Why not let her do what she was born to do?
He, on the other hand, bid his parents good-bye, and snuck out earlier the next morning. Why stay longer than the two-legs wanted him to? He was pretty bothersome to them at times, and him and they weren't on the best of terms. Zeus and Isis both knew that Thor leaving might have been the best choice. No one wanted to adopt a cat that didn't want to be adopted. He was too free of a spirit, and though only a few knew this, it would be well-known by many before he hit his thirtieth moon.
Cocky is as cocky does, though. His first few moons were the roughest. Though he would never admit it, as a kittypet he needn't have worried about fining his own food. The Two-legs provided it for him. Now, though, out in the wild, he had to figure out how exactly he would even teach himself. Luckily, other loners were in there territory, so what did he do? Follow by example. Granted, he was nowhere near capable of stealthiness at that age, but no cat really minded. A loner was a loner, they may not be with the newly-formed Clans, but they had their own Code, so to speak. So, slowly his hunting skills improved and he wasn't hungry every night. Maybe every three nights or so.
Once he was fully grown, however, he used that to his advantage. He had never really been in a fight before, of course. But skirmishes? Thor came on top simply because of his size. This, went straight to his head. And I kid you not, it probably has grown three sizes bigger. That and, the day he caught sight of a fine looking Clan she-cat on some...patrol they called it, right? Well, after that, she-cats who could kick some major ass and still look good doing it were pretty high up on his list. Though we all know opposites attract. A cat with brains would probably suit him better. He tried to flirt with several other non-Clan cats, and let's just say...it didn't end well. If Thor ever tells you all his scars are from fights, don't listen to a word of it. Over the moons, our favorite tom never lost his stubbornness. Which, may explain all of the injuries he's gained from simply saying(in a pretty rude tone, mind you) that someone was wrong. Currently this tom is milling around where ever he pleases. Who knows what havoc will ensue with Thor running about.
Critique level | Criticize all aspects of my character.
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Thor;;
Aug 4, 2011 10:38:24 GMT -10
Post by Rolo on Aug 4, 2011 10:38:24 GMT -10
Appearance: You need to mention his eye colour.
Apart from that, I believe you're there :3 Well done. Change that one thing, and Pyro will accept him.
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