Post by flickerfly on Jan 16, 2012 16:33:33 GMT -10
Name | Redkit/RedWhisker
Gender | She-cat
Age | Four moons.
Rank | Kit.
Clan | Meadowclan.
Beliefs | She is confused about what Starclan is, and to her it is just something that cats mention a lot. She has heard that they watch over her, though, and she likes that idea. Cats watching over her, keeping her safe.
She wonders why cats spend so much time arguing about whether something is real or not. If it's real, then it exists and it can help us. And if it isn't, then it doesn't hurt us. And if some of the cats are wrong, then so what? It doesn't harm you.
Parents |
Mother: Deep (rogue) (deceased) [NP]
Father: Unknown.
Siblings | Ghost (rogue) (deceased) [NP], Bright (rogue) (deceased) [NP].
Other Kin | None.
Mate | Kits can't have mates.
Crush | Kits can't have crushes.
Kits | Kits can't have kits.
Apprentice/Mentor | Kits can't have apprentices or mentors.
Appearance | She is a small and fragile-looking kit for her age, but she is more durable then she looks. Her tail is shorter then a normal tail, at about half the length. This does not help her balance. She has long fur through all of the seasons, meaning she becomes hot easily. She looks larger then she is, because her fur is long.
Said fur is reddish brown, with lighter and darker spots all over it. She has four white markings- the first is on her right front paw, stretching up about halfway to the knee. The second is on her tail, from the tip to about one third from the base. The third is relatively small, on her chest. The fourth and final marking covers her left ear.
Her pawpads and nose are medium grey, although her paws do have some pink on them. Her eyes are yellow, and seem intense regardless of her calm or anger. She has large claws.
Her muzzle is long and even slightly doglike. It is adorned with her also long whiskers, which constantly seem to be twitching slightly. The rest of her features are average, neither beautiful nor ugly.
Personality | Redkit has one motive in life- curiosity. If something exists, then she wants to see it. She is constantly wandering off and can often be seen at the edges of the camp staring out at the territory. She has explored almost every part of the camp, and is often bored. If there is something she wants to know, she will find out.
If you say something, she will believe it- unless someone told her otherwise beforehand. Being believed by her is on a first-come basis. When she is spoken to, she hears only the words, and not anything behind it- sarcasm will only confuse her.
Redkit is not a social creature, and large amounts of cats will terrify her- she's not sure why. If she panics about it though, she does so quietly, and in fact she expresses all her emotions in a somewhat understated manner. This does not mean that she is not emotional- she is. Very. She is generally very quiet, and she will listen to everything you say, without judging you.
She is almost incapable of anger, and in circumstances where a cat would usually feel anger, she will almost always feel either sadness, confusion or acceptance. It would take a lot to crack her.
Skills | Redkit is clumsy- She is often tripping and tends to be jerky rather then graceful in her movements. Her strength is around average, though maybe slightly less. Her lack of agility tends to be her weakness, however.
She has good reflexes though, and just because she falls over while dodging an attack doesn't mean she didn't get out of the way. Add to this her good hearing and eyesight, and she is surprisingly good at staying away from anything she wants to stay away from.
She could easily be tricked due to her unconditional trust in what cats say, particularly since she is only a kit and very naive. She has a good memory, however, and will be honest about what she sees.
History | Her mother, Deep, was found dead near the edge of Meadowclan territory, presumably from sickness. Along with her were three kits, of which one was dead. The warriors which found her brought the two living kits back to camp. One, however, was very weak and died shortly after being discovered. The strongest kit however survived and was slowly nursed back to full health. The kit's original name, unknown to the cats of the clan, is Berry. Her new name was Redkit, for her ginger fur. She was taken into the clan and adopted by __________. She remembers nothing of her mother, as she was still very young then. In fact, she thinks that she is a clan-born cat, because she doesn't remember not being one, does she?
Critique level | Make my bio FoF suitable.(Criticism scares me.)
Gender | She-cat
Age | Four moons.
Rank | Kit.
Clan | Meadowclan.
Beliefs | She is confused about what Starclan is, and to her it is just something that cats mention a lot. She has heard that they watch over her, though, and she likes that idea. Cats watching over her, keeping her safe.
She wonders why cats spend so much time arguing about whether something is real or not. If it's real, then it exists and it can help us. And if it isn't, then it doesn't hurt us. And if some of the cats are wrong, then so what? It doesn't harm you.
Parents |
Mother: Deep (rogue) (deceased) [NP]
Father: Unknown.
Siblings | Ghost (rogue) (deceased) [NP], Bright (rogue) (deceased) [NP].
Other Kin | None.
Mate | Kits can't have mates.
Crush | Kits can't have crushes.
Kits | Kits can't have kits.
Apprentice/Mentor | Kits can't have apprentices or mentors.
Appearance | She is a small and fragile-looking kit for her age, but she is more durable then she looks. Her tail is shorter then a normal tail, at about half the length. This does not help her balance. She has long fur through all of the seasons, meaning she becomes hot easily. She looks larger then she is, because her fur is long.
Said fur is reddish brown, with lighter and darker spots all over it. She has four white markings- the first is on her right front paw, stretching up about halfway to the knee. The second is on her tail, from the tip to about one third from the base. The third is relatively small, on her chest. The fourth and final marking covers her left ear.
Her pawpads and nose are medium grey, although her paws do have some pink on them. Her eyes are yellow, and seem intense regardless of her calm or anger. She has large claws.
Her muzzle is long and even slightly doglike. It is adorned with her also long whiskers, which constantly seem to be twitching slightly. The rest of her features are average, neither beautiful nor ugly.
Personality | Redkit has one motive in life- curiosity. If something exists, then she wants to see it. She is constantly wandering off and can often be seen at the edges of the camp staring out at the territory. She has explored almost every part of the camp, and is often bored. If there is something she wants to know, she will find out.
If you say something, she will believe it- unless someone told her otherwise beforehand. Being believed by her is on a first-come basis. When she is spoken to, she hears only the words, and not anything behind it- sarcasm will only confuse her.
Redkit is not a social creature, and large amounts of cats will terrify her- she's not sure why. If she panics about it though, she does so quietly, and in fact she expresses all her emotions in a somewhat understated manner. This does not mean that she is not emotional- she is. Very. She is generally very quiet, and she will listen to everything you say, without judging you.
She is almost incapable of anger, and in circumstances where a cat would usually feel anger, she will almost always feel either sadness, confusion or acceptance. It would take a lot to crack her.
Skills | Redkit is clumsy- She is often tripping and tends to be jerky rather then graceful in her movements. Her strength is around average, though maybe slightly less. Her lack of agility tends to be her weakness, however.
She has good reflexes though, and just because she falls over while dodging an attack doesn't mean she didn't get out of the way. Add to this her good hearing and eyesight, and she is surprisingly good at staying away from anything she wants to stay away from.
She could easily be tricked due to her unconditional trust in what cats say, particularly since she is only a kit and very naive. She has a good memory, however, and will be honest about what she sees.
History | Her mother, Deep, was found dead near the edge of Meadowclan territory, presumably from sickness. Along with her were three kits, of which one was dead. The warriors which found her brought the two living kits back to camp. One, however, was very weak and died shortly after being discovered. The strongest kit however survived and was slowly nursed back to full health. The kit's original name, unknown to the cats of the clan, is Berry. Her new name was Redkit, for her ginger fur. She was taken into the clan and adopted by __________. She remembers nothing of her mother, as she was still very young then. In fact, she thinks that she is a clan-born cat, because she doesn't remember not being one, does she?
Critique level | Make my bio FoF suitable.
