Post by hilldust124 on Dec 19, 2011 11:50:24 GMT -10
Name |
Hazelpaw
Gender |
she-cat
Age |
6
Rank |
apprentice
Clan |
StreamClan
Beliefs |
Hazelpaw is an average believer in Starclan. She understands when you die you go to StarClan, but she is still young and doesn't really understand any of it. The apprentice also has a subtle belief in karma.(Although it isn't technically a religion...)
Parents |
Flamewhisker[NP, deceased], Ravenstreak[NP, deceased]
Siblings |
Nightpaw[NP, deceased]
Other Kin |
none
Mate |
not yet
Crush |
not yet
Kits |
not yet
Apprentice/Mentor |
not yet
Appearance |
Hazelpaw is a short but long, sleek she-cat making her fast and agile. Her paws are small, however, and is prone to clumsiness. Her short fur makes her a faster swimmer since there is less drag. Hazel's fur is black as midnight with a dark russet mask covering her bright amber eyes. Along with the face marking, her short, thin tail is a dark russet blending into black as it goes up. The apprentice has good sight and smell, but is balanced out by short, lazy whiskers.
Personality |
Hazel is a soft-spoken cat that only talks when needed, and usually not any other time. She is calm and collected, but in scary situations can be a little hard to control. Despite this she is as loyal as can be and would be as mad at herself as much as the leader if she accidently broke a rule. Hazelpaw is like this since she was raised by two very loyal cats that died fighting for their Clan. She wasn't too depressed about her parents death, although she was pretty sad, because they died brave, loyal-to-the-Clan deaths. She doesn't really like to talk about it though. She doesn't have anything to say about it, or for anything anymore. She learned words can be as dangerous as claws from some gullible times as a kit, since she believes what anyone says and would take up their opinion even if she didn't understand it.
Along with being loyal, she is friendly to her clanmates. She would never try to harm anyone in any way. She would smile in their direction, but, of course, would rarely talk. She isn't exactly shy, she's just isn't open. Hazelpaw keeps the small amount of thoughts and opinions to herself, but usually gets everything from those around her like a kit to their parents.
Hazel is a quiet, gullible she-cat, but is so loyal she would do anything for her clan.
Skills |
Hazelpaw is a good runner and swimmer because of her long, skinny body and short fur. She is also good at tracking because of her good sight and smell.
This is balanced out by her lack in fighting and somewhat in hunting aswell. She has small claws, paws, and doesn't have much upper or lower body strength for clawing and kicking. She may be fast and good at tracking but is very clumsy at catching prey.
Other things she wouldn't be too good at is any kind of leading. She doesn't have much of a voice(no pun intended) in anything. Plus she couldn't really stick to any decisions.
Otherwise she is great in memorization and tactics due to her open mind and listening skills.
History |
Hazelpaw was born to two loyal Streamclan warriors after the four clans settled in. She was like most other kits, curious and gullible. When she became an apprentice, her parents had died serving StreamClan. She lost all of her curiosity in details and just wanted straight facts. That's why she doesn't know how exactly they died, she just knows they died. Her brother also died in the winter from sickness, but she wasn't too close anyways. That is why she is so loyal and loving to her clanmembers, because they have adopted her family role. She is also gullible to anyone because she trusts anyone's opinion like she would to her parents'. Also, because of the sudden deaths, she was more prone to not knowing what to do in scary situations like death, and she has no control over her emotions because she can't think straight or calm herself down due to the panic.
Critique level |
Criticise all aspects of my character
Hazelpaw
Gender |
she-cat
Age |
6
Rank |
apprentice
Clan |
StreamClan
Beliefs |
Hazelpaw is an average believer in Starclan. She understands when you die you go to StarClan, but she is still young and doesn't really understand any of it. The apprentice also has a subtle belief in karma.(Although it isn't technically a religion...)
Parents |
Flamewhisker[NP, deceased], Ravenstreak[NP, deceased]
Siblings |
Nightpaw[NP, deceased]
Other Kin |
none
Mate |
not yet
Crush |
not yet
Kits |
not yet
Apprentice/Mentor |
not yet
Appearance |
Hazelpaw is a short but long, sleek she-cat making her fast and agile. Her paws are small, however, and is prone to clumsiness. Her short fur makes her a faster swimmer since there is less drag. Hazel's fur is black as midnight with a dark russet mask covering her bright amber eyes. Along with the face marking, her short, thin tail is a dark russet blending into black as it goes up. The apprentice has good sight and smell, but is balanced out by short, lazy whiskers.
Personality |
Hazel is a soft-spoken cat that only talks when needed, and usually not any other time. She is calm and collected, but in scary situations can be a little hard to control. Despite this she is as loyal as can be and would be as mad at herself as much as the leader if she accidently broke a rule. Hazelpaw is like this since she was raised by two very loyal cats that died fighting for their Clan. She wasn't too depressed about her parents death, although she was pretty sad, because they died brave, loyal-to-the-Clan deaths. She doesn't really like to talk about it though. She doesn't have anything to say about it, or for anything anymore. She learned words can be as dangerous as claws from some gullible times as a kit, since she believes what anyone says and would take up their opinion even if she didn't understand it.
Along with being loyal, she is friendly to her clanmates. She would never try to harm anyone in any way. She would smile in their direction, but, of course, would rarely talk. She isn't exactly shy, she's just isn't open. Hazelpaw keeps the small amount of thoughts and opinions to herself, but usually gets everything from those around her like a kit to their parents.
Hazel is a quiet, gullible she-cat, but is so loyal she would do anything for her clan.
Skills |
Hazelpaw is a good runner and swimmer because of her long, skinny body and short fur. She is also good at tracking because of her good sight and smell.
This is balanced out by her lack in fighting and somewhat in hunting aswell. She has small claws, paws, and doesn't have much upper or lower body strength for clawing and kicking. She may be fast and good at tracking but is very clumsy at catching prey.
Other things she wouldn't be too good at is any kind of leading. She doesn't have much of a voice(no pun intended) in anything. Plus she couldn't really stick to any decisions.
Otherwise she is great in memorization and tactics due to her open mind and listening skills.
History |
Hazelpaw was born to two loyal Streamclan warriors after the four clans settled in. She was like most other kits, curious and gullible. When she became an apprentice, her parents had died serving StreamClan. She lost all of her curiosity in details and just wanted straight facts. That's why she doesn't know how exactly they died, she just knows they died. Her brother also died in the winter from sickness, but she wasn't too close anyways. That is why she is so loyal and loving to her clanmembers, because they have adopted her family role. She is also gullible to anyone because she trusts anyone's opinion like she would to her parents'. Also, because of the sudden deaths, she was more prone to not knowing what to do in scary situations like death, and she has no control over her emotions because she can't think straight or calm herself down due to the panic.
Critique level |
Criticise all aspects of my character
