Post by Mockingbird on Dec 1, 2011 11:15:33 GMT -10
Name | Foxclaw
Gender | Tom
Age | 18 Moons
Rank | Warrior
Clan | Fogclan
Beliefs | Foxclaw has never believed in Starclan. It's always been a bedtime story to him, something to comfort kits when the darkness got too scary. Foxclaw refuses to accept a belief in such a thing, but hides his unbelief well having learned the stories and supposed "truths" of the starry warriors.
Parents | Blackfoot, Redpelt
Siblings | Lost
Other Kin | Unknown
Mate | Not yet.
Crush | Not yet.
Kits | Not yet.
Apprentice/Mentor | Not yet.
Appearance | Example
Foxclaw wasn't given his name without cause; the tom really does look like a small fox. His pelt is a vibrant orange-red color, shiny and thick, though close to the skin. He has a long, dark stripe down his spine that starts between his ears and ends at the tip of his bushy tail, wrapping the very tip in darkness. His legs are pitch black as well from the middle to the paw, some flecks of red peppering the dark color. There are a few black stripes on his face, around his eyes, adding to a fierce appearance. His eyes are a vibrant green, slivers of deep brown cutting through here and there, adding incredible depth. Foxclaw's throat and underbelly accent his dark body with a clean white stripe that stretches over the inside of his legs at the very top. This white fur is on the insides of his ears as well. Every inch of fur has a velvety appearance though it is certainly never completely clean.
Foxclaw's body is large and intimidating, his shoulders broad and powerful. His back slopes downward into shorter rear legs that are encased in toned muscle. His bushy tail provides him with graceful balance in both agility and appearance, and his paws are small compared to the rest of his body, allowing him stealth and speed.
Personality | Foxclaw is a stoic cat, who doesn't say much unless it's necessary that he be heard. He is intelligent and thinks everything through before he begins a task; he makes sure that his companions know their plan before they execute it. Foxclaw is not a kindhearted feline, however, and expects that everyone keep up with him. He will not wait for you if you fall behind, nor will he baby you and answer the same questions time and time again. Foxclaw expects excellence from his comrades and his trainees, and he will accept no less than that. When he has an opinion, he sticks by it, and rarely will he be swayed. Certainly, he is smart enough to know when he is wrong, and he will not allow pride to stand in the way of his intellect. Though he is a very prideful young cat, Foxclaw is older than his years because of the things he has seen in his clan. There is no room for the foolish and no rest for the weary under his eye.
Skills | Foxclaw is a powerful warrior and fabulous hunter, though his size detracts from his ability to be quiet at high speeds, and harder still for him to reach those speeds. He is skilled at giving advice, when he chooses to, and is a great teacher to those who can handle his rather detached personality. Foxclaw is also quite the charmer when a she-cat catches his eye.
History | Foxclaw was born into Fogclan, a kit with a bleak future ahead of him already. His father was killed in a border battle with Streamclan when he was only 2 moons old, and a few moons after he was apprenticed his mother died of illness. His siblings were lost in a snowstorm just before their warrior ceremonies. It was in his warrior career that things got interesting for him. When Volepelt took over as leader of the clan and began impressing his beliefs of Starclan on every cat under his command, Foxclaw retreated into the shadows, unsure of how to react. His mind was made for him when a young cat died from his sinwounds, a cat Foxclaw had been quite fond of and had apprenticed with when he was younger. That was the end of Foxclaw's silence, and he began plotting against the leader, knowing someday things would change. Someday, he thought, Volepelt's reign of terror would come to an end.
And he would be the one to end it.
Critique level | Make my cat FoF suitable
Gender | Tom
Age | 18 Moons
Rank | Warrior
Clan | Fogclan
Beliefs | Foxclaw has never believed in Starclan. It's always been a bedtime story to him, something to comfort kits when the darkness got too scary. Foxclaw refuses to accept a belief in such a thing, but hides his unbelief well having learned the stories and supposed "truths" of the starry warriors.
Parents | Blackfoot, Redpelt
Siblings | Lost
Other Kin | Unknown
Mate | Not yet.
Crush | Not yet.
Kits | Not yet.
Apprentice/Mentor | Not yet.
Appearance | Example
Foxclaw wasn't given his name without cause; the tom really does look like a small fox. His pelt is a vibrant orange-red color, shiny and thick, though close to the skin. He has a long, dark stripe down his spine that starts between his ears and ends at the tip of his bushy tail, wrapping the very tip in darkness. His legs are pitch black as well from the middle to the paw, some flecks of red peppering the dark color. There are a few black stripes on his face, around his eyes, adding to a fierce appearance. His eyes are a vibrant green, slivers of deep brown cutting through here and there, adding incredible depth. Foxclaw's throat and underbelly accent his dark body with a clean white stripe that stretches over the inside of his legs at the very top. This white fur is on the insides of his ears as well. Every inch of fur has a velvety appearance though it is certainly never completely clean.
Foxclaw's body is large and intimidating, his shoulders broad and powerful. His back slopes downward into shorter rear legs that are encased in toned muscle. His bushy tail provides him with graceful balance in both agility and appearance, and his paws are small compared to the rest of his body, allowing him stealth and speed.
Personality | Foxclaw is a stoic cat, who doesn't say much unless it's necessary that he be heard. He is intelligent and thinks everything through before he begins a task; he makes sure that his companions know their plan before they execute it. Foxclaw is not a kindhearted feline, however, and expects that everyone keep up with him. He will not wait for you if you fall behind, nor will he baby you and answer the same questions time and time again. Foxclaw expects excellence from his comrades and his trainees, and he will accept no less than that. When he has an opinion, he sticks by it, and rarely will he be swayed. Certainly, he is smart enough to know when he is wrong, and he will not allow pride to stand in the way of his intellect. Though he is a very prideful young cat, Foxclaw is older than his years because of the things he has seen in his clan. There is no room for the foolish and no rest for the weary under his eye.
Skills | Foxclaw is a powerful warrior and fabulous hunter, though his size detracts from his ability to be quiet at high speeds, and harder still for him to reach those speeds. He is skilled at giving advice, when he chooses to, and is a great teacher to those who can handle his rather detached personality. Foxclaw is also quite the charmer when a she-cat catches his eye.
History | Foxclaw was born into Fogclan, a kit with a bleak future ahead of him already. His father was killed in a border battle with Streamclan when he was only 2 moons old, and a few moons after he was apprenticed his mother died of illness. His siblings were lost in a snowstorm just before their warrior ceremonies. It was in his warrior career that things got interesting for him. When Volepelt took over as leader of the clan and began impressing his beliefs of Starclan on every cat under his command, Foxclaw retreated into the shadows, unsure of how to react. His mind was made for him when a young cat died from his sinwounds, a cat Foxclaw had been quite fond of and had apprenticed with when he was younger. That was the end of Foxclaw's silence, and he began plotting against the leader, knowing someday things would change. Someday, he thought, Volepelt's reign of terror would come to an end.
And he would be the one to end it.
Critique level | Make my cat FoF suitable
