Post by Cloudbat on Jan 14, 2012 7:58:47 GMT -10
Bane of the Pure
PROLOGUE
It began with a dream.
A dream where once more she sat in the beautiful glade of her ancestors, lit by their holy light. She bowed her head in obeisance, relishing their presence. “You have news to share with me, StarClan?” She asked respectfully.
“Indeed we do. You remember, of course, that we could only give you one of your extra lives, because that was the only one Owlstar had lost?”
The FogClan leader hissed under her breath. Of course she remembered how that impure excuse for a leader had robbed her of her rightful inheritance.
“Yes. What of it?” She asked warily. What did they mean by that?
“Would you not like a chance to earn the rest of them for yourself?”
“What do you mean?” The ivory FogClanner asked shakily. How on earth could she do that? Was there some sort of test she had to pass?
“You would have to leave your Clan – it would take moons, perhaps even seasons. But it would be a way to prove once and for all that you are the rightful leader of FogClan.”
What? Of course she was the rightful leader of FogClan. And what were they driving at? Just because she’d been robbed of her lives didn’t mean she wasn’t fully capable of turning this sin-drenched Clan into a shining community of purity.
“What is it that you are proposing?” She asked, trying to keep her tone respectful. “You must hunt down Owlstar and her rebels and kill her seven times, so that we may give you the lives that are rightfully yours. That is the only way.”
Miststar’s blue-green eyes widened as her fur bushed up along her spine. It was ridiculous. How on earth could she leave FogClan? This was her home, her kingdom. She had such plans for it.
Yet…perhaps StarClan were right. Who was she to doubt them? It was by their grace that FogClan was hers anyway. Should she not bow to their wisdom? Besides…Volepelt was a fine deputy. She had complete faith in him to run the Clan while she was away. She need not even fully explain the purpose of her journey –simply say StarClan had called her away.
Which was nothing less than the truth, after all.
Then, she would return with seven extra lives. The twisted she-cat smiled. It was a reward worth the risks.
“Yes.” She said, bowing her head once again. “I have considered your proposal and I agree. I thank you for blessing me with your wisdom once more. But how am I to find Owlstar? I have no idea where she is.”
“Go east, far to the east of your territory, to the MoonGlade and beyond, into the mountains. There you will find what you seek. Good luck, Miststar.” The unknown spirit that had been speaking came forward and licked her head, then turned and vanished into the trees.
It rejoined the rest of StarClan, who silently watched it, waiting for it to speak. “She agreed.” It said, somewhat cautiously, but with its head up, and eyes certain despite the slight trembling in its meow. “Good.” Murmured one of the spirits in the crowd. “Very good. At last, our true will shall be done.”
Unknowing of this, Miststar awoke.
The First Life: Perseverance
“But why?” spoke the dusty brown tabby tom in front of her. It was not even in a curious tone of voice – just flat, unemotional. “You need not know why, dear Volepelt. I trust you to take care of FogClan in my absence. I will return.” She hoped her imperious tone of voice would be enough to dissuade him from querying further. It was. He modestly cast his gaze to one side, tail twitching. “Then I shall trust to the powers of our ancestors to keep you safe.” “Good. StarClan bless you in my time away.”
With that, she turned, without any hesitation, and left him, pausing only to eat a cardinal from the fresh-kill pile.
With that, her journey truly began.
---
After much consideration, she had realized the best route, if the slowest, would be to go south, and circle around StreamClan territory to get to the mountains. It may have been easier to simply go through the marshy territory, saying she was traveling to the MoonGlade, but she did not want to risk it. This route might be slow, but it was the surest guarantee of secrecy.
It was a fine day, a good sign. The sun permeated even the fog that shrouded her land. Miststar liked the fog; it was cool, how she imagined purity would be if it were something tangible. And that, she mused to herself, is the problem. Sinners do not understand the breadth of their crimes because they cannot see the darkness welling in their souls, the brightness that would come if they let it.
No matter. They would all see it, in time. When she had life enough to cleanse all the sinners in every Clan.
---
A quarter moon later brought her to the base of the mountains themselves.
And to the foolish tom who wandered there. Willowpaw. A trembling, stuttering idiot who had left with that black and white traitor that she tracked and pinned without mercy.
“Tell me where Owlstar is.” She hissed, her paws pressing into his chest. “Tell me!” “I-I-I d-don’t K-KNOW!” He cried, twisting under the claws sinking through his gray fur, his ears laid flat and green eyes wild. “Of course you do! You left with her!” “I-I-I g-got l-l-l-lost! I-I’m on my OWN! P-p-please! L-l-let me go! I d-d-don’t know anything!” “LIAR!” “N-n-NO! PLEASE!” His voice rose to a wail. Miststar, wild with rage, pressed down further, her claws sinking into his flesh.
How easy it would be to end his worthless life.
But no. Taking his life would be pointless. It was Owlstar alone that she would murder, to save her soul from as little corruption as possible. She might be near-perfect, but killing was still killing.
“Fine.” She said callously, releasing her grip. “I’ll let you go. But bear in mind – should I see your wretched hide again, I’ll send you away with some real wounds to think about.” Willowpaw, shuddering, leapt up and dashed away over the grass faster than a rabbit.
Not only was he a traitor to StarClan, he was a traitor to the true way of life. He was meaningless and blind, so she would have nothing more to do with him.
---
She pondered how best to get at Owlstar. She remembered who had deserted FogClan besides Willowpaw. Sootpaw. Cinderpaw. Hailstorm. Blackpaw. The three apprentices would be easy enough to disable….but Hailstorm was a strong, experienced tom.
Even more so, how to whittle down her lives without raising suspicion? It would be too difficult to rid her of all of them at once…even if she could separate Owlstar from her precious minions.
Slowly, plans began to form as she drew ever closer to her hated foe.
---
Finally, she saw her, as she peered through a rare bush in the stark, craggy cliffs of stone. Her enemy. The one cat who, alongside Gingerstar (the living personification of sin herself), was the single greatest threat to her power.
Now, to lure her away from her faithful flock.
---
After only two days’ worth of spying, it was easy to see what their biggest weakness was. Food. There was precious little of it in these forbidding rock behemoths, with their lack of undergrowth and cold, cold nights. Even she was finding it difficult to sustain herself, and she was an accomplished hunter. She felt smug satisfaction that Owlstar would be finding it even more challenging.
Surely they must regret it by now. But perhaps not one of them has had the dignity to admit their sins. Poor young minds, blinded by their warped loyalty. I shall lead them into a new era where they will be under a leader who shall provide for their souls and their bodies.
---
Sootpaw was out hunting. Again. For as many times as a cat could hunt in these boring peaks, scratching his paws to the bone, without going crazy. Then again, he reminded himself grimly, it sure beats the crazy back home. If that even counts as home anymore.
Still, home here wasn’t a delicious prospect either, in either sense of the word. The lanky gray tom duly sniffed the air, tasted it, and flicked his ears. Not so much as a mouse bone. Typical.
What managed not to die of cold got taken by the ever-watchful birds of prey that seemed endless around here.
He padded on a few more lengths, more out of habit than anything. He sniffed wearily once again….and his whole body perked up. Was that…was that prey he smelled? Then his heart sank. If it was, it was probably some fox’s or raptor’s dinner. He sniffed once more, harder this time, mouth open. No! It was an honest-to-StarClan bird that didn’t even smell of any predators!
If he’d been in any more of a clear state of mind, the gray apprentice might have held back, might have questioned such an easy chance at food. But so overjoyed he was that he simply padded forward, enthusiasm renewed, to find a dead robin that seemed like a gift from StarClan.
He was so weary he didn’t even notice the careful feathers arranged to cover the slit made along its stomach, did not smell the faint but unmistakable whiff of the fruits known to the Clans as deathberries.
---
Miststar smiled. It had worked perfectly. It was a pain to give up food that could have easily kept her going for more than a day, but it was worth it. Silently, her scent carefully masked by having rolled in mint leaves, she crept along after him, keeping to the shadows cast by the boulders and tall, sparse pine fir trees.
---
Owlstar was puzzled but overjoyed when Sootpaw brought back the robin, happier than she’d seen him in almost a moon. “Let everyone else take a bite of it first, I insist.” Despite her noble words, the stocky she-cat’s stomach growled loudly.
Cinderpaw broke out in giggles as Blackpaw tried to hide a smile. “No.” Sootpaw insisted. “You have half. We’ll split the rest.”
“If you insist.” Owlstar hide, attempting not to laugh herself. Carefully stripping off the feathers, she lowered her mouth to the bird’s chest to eat, relishing the bland but wonderful meat. Actually, not quite as bland as a regular robin…smelled slightly unusual too – but by the time even the faintest suspicions had occurred to her, she was already choking, trying to hack up the meat she’d swallowed while the others gasped, trying to hold her down as she thrashed.
But there was nothing they could do; she died.
Thus Miststar took the first life for her own.
PROLOGUE
It began with a dream.
A dream where once more she sat in the beautiful glade of her ancestors, lit by their holy light. She bowed her head in obeisance, relishing their presence. “You have news to share with me, StarClan?” She asked respectfully.
“Indeed we do. You remember, of course, that we could only give you one of your extra lives, because that was the only one Owlstar had lost?”
The FogClan leader hissed under her breath. Of course she remembered how that impure excuse for a leader had robbed her of her rightful inheritance.
“Yes. What of it?” She asked warily. What did they mean by that?
“Would you not like a chance to earn the rest of them for yourself?”
“What do you mean?” The ivory FogClanner asked shakily. How on earth could she do that? Was there some sort of test she had to pass?
“You would have to leave your Clan – it would take moons, perhaps even seasons. But it would be a way to prove once and for all that you are the rightful leader of FogClan.”
What? Of course she was the rightful leader of FogClan. And what were they driving at? Just because she’d been robbed of her lives didn’t mean she wasn’t fully capable of turning this sin-drenched Clan into a shining community of purity.
“What is it that you are proposing?” She asked, trying to keep her tone respectful. “You must hunt down Owlstar and her rebels and kill her seven times, so that we may give you the lives that are rightfully yours. That is the only way.”
Miststar’s blue-green eyes widened as her fur bushed up along her spine. It was ridiculous. How on earth could she leave FogClan? This was her home, her kingdom. She had such plans for it.
Yet…perhaps StarClan were right. Who was she to doubt them? It was by their grace that FogClan was hers anyway. Should she not bow to their wisdom? Besides…Volepelt was a fine deputy. She had complete faith in him to run the Clan while she was away. She need not even fully explain the purpose of her journey –simply say StarClan had called her away.
Which was nothing less than the truth, after all.
Then, she would return with seven extra lives. The twisted she-cat smiled. It was a reward worth the risks.
“Yes.” She said, bowing her head once again. “I have considered your proposal and I agree. I thank you for blessing me with your wisdom once more. But how am I to find Owlstar? I have no idea where she is.”
“Go east, far to the east of your territory, to the MoonGlade and beyond, into the mountains. There you will find what you seek. Good luck, Miststar.” The unknown spirit that had been speaking came forward and licked her head, then turned and vanished into the trees.
It rejoined the rest of StarClan, who silently watched it, waiting for it to speak. “She agreed.” It said, somewhat cautiously, but with its head up, and eyes certain despite the slight trembling in its meow. “Good.” Murmured one of the spirits in the crowd. “Very good. At last, our true will shall be done.”
Unknowing of this, Miststar awoke.
The First Life: Perseverance
“But why?” spoke the dusty brown tabby tom in front of her. It was not even in a curious tone of voice – just flat, unemotional. “You need not know why, dear Volepelt. I trust you to take care of FogClan in my absence. I will return.” She hoped her imperious tone of voice would be enough to dissuade him from querying further. It was. He modestly cast his gaze to one side, tail twitching. “Then I shall trust to the powers of our ancestors to keep you safe.” “Good. StarClan bless you in my time away.”
With that, she turned, without any hesitation, and left him, pausing only to eat a cardinal from the fresh-kill pile.
With that, her journey truly began.
---
After much consideration, she had realized the best route, if the slowest, would be to go south, and circle around StreamClan territory to get to the mountains. It may have been easier to simply go through the marshy territory, saying she was traveling to the MoonGlade, but she did not want to risk it. This route might be slow, but it was the surest guarantee of secrecy.
It was a fine day, a good sign. The sun permeated even the fog that shrouded her land. Miststar liked the fog; it was cool, how she imagined purity would be if it were something tangible. And that, she mused to herself, is the problem. Sinners do not understand the breadth of their crimes because they cannot see the darkness welling in their souls, the brightness that would come if they let it.
No matter. They would all see it, in time. When she had life enough to cleanse all the sinners in every Clan.
---
A quarter moon later brought her to the base of the mountains themselves.
And to the foolish tom who wandered there. Willowpaw. A trembling, stuttering idiot who had left with that black and white traitor that she tracked and pinned without mercy.
“Tell me where Owlstar is.” She hissed, her paws pressing into his chest. “Tell me!” “I-I-I d-don’t K-KNOW!” He cried, twisting under the claws sinking through his gray fur, his ears laid flat and green eyes wild. “Of course you do! You left with her!” “I-I-I g-got l-l-l-lost! I-I’m on my OWN! P-p-please! L-l-let me go! I d-d-don’t know anything!” “LIAR!” “N-n-NO! PLEASE!” His voice rose to a wail. Miststar, wild with rage, pressed down further, her claws sinking into his flesh.
How easy it would be to end his worthless life.
But no. Taking his life would be pointless. It was Owlstar alone that she would murder, to save her soul from as little corruption as possible. She might be near-perfect, but killing was still killing.
“Fine.” She said callously, releasing her grip. “I’ll let you go. But bear in mind – should I see your wretched hide again, I’ll send you away with some real wounds to think about.” Willowpaw, shuddering, leapt up and dashed away over the grass faster than a rabbit.
Not only was he a traitor to StarClan, he was a traitor to the true way of life. He was meaningless and blind, so she would have nothing more to do with him.
---
She pondered how best to get at Owlstar. She remembered who had deserted FogClan besides Willowpaw. Sootpaw. Cinderpaw. Hailstorm. Blackpaw. The three apprentices would be easy enough to disable….but Hailstorm was a strong, experienced tom.
Even more so, how to whittle down her lives without raising suspicion? It would be too difficult to rid her of all of them at once…even if she could separate Owlstar from her precious minions.
Slowly, plans began to form as she drew ever closer to her hated foe.
---
Finally, she saw her, as she peered through a rare bush in the stark, craggy cliffs of stone. Her enemy. The one cat who, alongside Gingerstar (the living personification of sin herself), was the single greatest threat to her power.
Now, to lure her away from her faithful flock.
---
After only two days’ worth of spying, it was easy to see what their biggest weakness was. Food. There was precious little of it in these forbidding rock behemoths, with their lack of undergrowth and cold, cold nights. Even she was finding it difficult to sustain herself, and she was an accomplished hunter. She felt smug satisfaction that Owlstar would be finding it even more challenging.
Surely they must regret it by now. But perhaps not one of them has had the dignity to admit their sins. Poor young minds, blinded by their warped loyalty. I shall lead them into a new era where they will be under a leader who shall provide for their souls and their bodies.
---
Sootpaw was out hunting. Again. For as many times as a cat could hunt in these boring peaks, scratching his paws to the bone, without going crazy. Then again, he reminded himself grimly, it sure beats the crazy back home. If that even counts as home anymore.
Still, home here wasn’t a delicious prospect either, in either sense of the word. The lanky gray tom duly sniffed the air, tasted it, and flicked his ears. Not so much as a mouse bone. Typical.
What managed not to die of cold got taken by the ever-watchful birds of prey that seemed endless around here.
He padded on a few more lengths, more out of habit than anything. He sniffed wearily once again….and his whole body perked up. Was that…was that prey he smelled? Then his heart sank. If it was, it was probably some fox’s or raptor’s dinner. He sniffed once more, harder this time, mouth open. No! It was an honest-to-StarClan bird that didn’t even smell of any predators!
If he’d been in any more of a clear state of mind, the gray apprentice might have held back, might have questioned such an easy chance at food. But so overjoyed he was that he simply padded forward, enthusiasm renewed, to find a dead robin that seemed like a gift from StarClan.
He was so weary he didn’t even notice the careful feathers arranged to cover the slit made along its stomach, did not smell the faint but unmistakable whiff of the fruits known to the Clans as deathberries.
---
Miststar smiled. It had worked perfectly. It was a pain to give up food that could have easily kept her going for more than a day, but it was worth it. Silently, her scent carefully masked by having rolled in mint leaves, she crept along after him, keeping to the shadows cast by the boulders and tall, sparse pine fir trees.
---
Owlstar was puzzled but overjoyed when Sootpaw brought back the robin, happier than she’d seen him in almost a moon. “Let everyone else take a bite of it first, I insist.” Despite her noble words, the stocky she-cat’s stomach growled loudly.
Cinderpaw broke out in giggles as Blackpaw tried to hide a smile. “No.” Sootpaw insisted. “You have half. We’ll split the rest.”
“If you insist.” Owlstar hide, attempting not to laugh herself. Carefully stripping off the feathers, she lowered her mouth to the bird’s chest to eat, relishing the bland but wonderful meat. Actually, not quite as bland as a regular robin…smelled slightly unusual too – but by the time even the faintest suspicions had occurred to her, she was already choking, trying to hack up the meat she’d swallowed while the others gasped, trying to hold her down as she thrashed.
But there was nothing they could do; she died.
Thus Miststar took the first life for her own.