Post by MONSTER <3 on Dec 19, 2011 19:40:18 GMT -10
Sorry the picture is a bit big > w < if i knew how to shrink it i would.
Name | Batpaw
Gender | She-cat
Age | 9 Moons
Rank | Apprentice
Clan | Streamclan
Beliefs | Batpaw heard about Starclan through many tales during her kithood, and thats how they mostly stayed to her. Tales. Without any proof that Starclan did or didn't exist, she wasn't left with much to believe. She used them more as a sign of hope, or a final resting place, than any other symbol that they were supposed to have.
Parents |
Mother;; Spiderstorm [NP, Deceased]
Father;; Ottertail [NP, Deceased]
Siblings |
Brother;; Mothpaw [Played by Pio, Alive]
Adoptive Brother;; Stonepaw [Played by Ember, Alive]
Adoptive Sister;; Dovepaw [Played by Ember, Alive]
Other Kin | None
Mate | None Yet
Crush | None Yet
Kits | None Yet
Apprentice/Mentor | Mottletail
Appearance | Batpaw is a brown furred she-cat with round golden eyes. Her coat is very slick and shiny, and she loves to groom it to keep it that way. Her paws, face, ears, and tail tip all have dark brown points to them- which easily contrasts and matches her golden eyes at the same time. She has long white whiskers that frame her black nose. She is a bit smaller than the average she-cat, but her limbs and stomach are lengthier than normal. This gives her a great ability for speed, but she uses it more to be graceful over anything else.
Personality | Batpaw is a she-cat with quite an interesting mindset and attitude. She is quite social and talkative, even if it is mostly gossip around the camp. She can be quite opinionated and loves to debate about different ideas- almost always with the idea that her thoughts are right. It is quite rare for her to bow to another cats ideas. Yes, Batpaw is quite a debater. If she can try to talk her way out of something, she will certainly try. She would much prefer talking and being with her friends over training any day- and sometimes she likes to convince cats that its better that way. If she cant get her way, or something goes wrong- she can get a bit. . over dramatic about it as well. Some may call her a drama queen, but she prefers to call it speaking her emotions. Even with some negative attributes, she can still be a very friendly cat. Usually, she will approach and make friends with most cats even. She loves to talk to others about anything and everything, and will help other cats out when she feels it is right.
Skills | Even though Batpaw is still an apprentice, she still has a few skills that are specific to her. First of all, she is quite good at debating and defending her points- even if she can be quite close-minded to new things. She is getting better at defending her words, and at coming up with reasons to counter others words as well- being quite good at making her arguments sounds more convincing than arrogant or bossy. Physically, she is defiantly not set to be a fighter, and probably not the best hunter either- but she is quite swift. Which, if used correctly, could make up for her lack of warrior skill- if she pays attention to how to improve that is.
History | Batpaw was born alongside her brother- Mothpaw- and her parents- Spiderstorm and Ottertail. Out of her family, she was drawn to her mother Spiderstorm the most- sense she seemed the most like her and understood her points more than any other cat. During her kithood, she did what most kits had done; played, got into trouble, and snuck out of camp a time or two. Just like all kits, she also got into trouble for sneaking out and getting lost on the way back. When she got back from her little adventure, she had both of her parents worried- but instead of apologizing and cowering in front of her parents, she stood her ground and listed her point and reasons for leaving. Unlike most kits, she got out of most of the trouble, using her ability to debate and prove her point. She was quite proud of this feat, and it has stayed with her as her proud moment in her kithood. This would soon form into one of her main skills as she matured into being an apprentice, into being Batpaw.
Critique level | Criticize All Aspects of My Character
Name | Batpaw
Gender | She-cat
Age | 9 Moons
Rank | Apprentice
Clan | Streamclan
Beliefs | Batpaw heard about Starclan through many tales during her kithood, and thats how they mostly stayed to her. Tales. Without any proof that Starclan did or didn't exist, she wasn't left with much to believe. She used them more as a sign of hope, or a final resting place, than any other symbol that they were supposed to have.
Parents |
Mother;; Spiderstorm [NP, Deceased]
Father;; Ottertail [NP, Deceased]
Siblings |
Brother;; Mothpaw [Played by Pio, Alive]
Adoptive Brother;; Stonepaw [Played by Ember, Alive]
Adoptive Sister;; Dovepaw [Played by Ember, Alive]
Other Kin | None
Mate | None Yet
Crush | None Yet
Kits | None Yet
Apprentice/Mentor | Mottletail
Appearance | Batpaw is a brown furred she-cat with round golden eyes. Her coat is very slick and shiny, and she loves to groom it to keep it that way. Her paws, face, ears, and tail tip all have dark brown points to them- which easily contrasts and matches her golden eyes at the same time. She has long white whiskers that frame her black nose. She is a bit smaller than the average she-cat, but her limbs and stomach are lengthier than normal. This gives her a great ability for speed, but she uses it more to be graceful over anything else.
Personality | Batpaw is a she-cat with quite an interesting mindset and attitude. She is quite social and talkative, even if it is mostly gossip around the camp. She can be quite opinionated and loves to debate about different ideas- almost always with the idea that her thoughts are right. It is quite rare for her to bow to another cats ideas. Yes, Batpaw is quite a debater. If she can try to talk her way out of something, she will certainly try. She would much prefer talking and being with her friends over training any day- and sometimes she likes to convince cats that its better that way. If she cant get her way, or something goes wrong- she can get a bit. . over dramatic about it as well. Some may call her a drama queen, but she prefers to call it speaking her emotions. Even with some negative attributes, she can still be a very friendly cat. Usually, she will approach and make friends with most cats even. She loves to talk to others about anything and everything, and will help other cats out when she feels it is right.
Skills | Even though Batpaw is still an apprentice, she still has a few skills that are specific to her. First of all, she is quite good at debating and defending her points- even if she can be quite close-minded to new things. She is getting better at defending her words, and at coming up with reasons to counter others words as well- being quite good at making her arguments sounds more convincing than arrogant or bossy. Physically, she is defiantly not set to be a fighter, and probably not the best hunter either- but she is quite swift. Which, if used correctly, could make up for her lack of warrior skill- if she pays attention to how to improve that is.
History | Batpaw was born alongside her brother- Mothpaw- and her parents- Spiderstorm and Ottertail. Out of her family, she was drawn to her mother Spiderstorm the most- sense she seemed the most like her and understood her points more than any other cat. During her kithood, she did what most kits had done; played, got into trouble, and snuck out of camp a time or two. Just like all kits, she also got into trouble for sneaking out and getting lost on the way back. When she got back from her little adventure, she had both of her parents worried- but instead of apologizing and cowering in front of her parents, she stood her ground and listed her point and reasons for leaving. Unlike most kits, she got out of most of the trouble, using her ability to debate and prove her point. She was quite proud of this feat, and it has stayed with her as her proud moment in her kithood. This would soon form into one of her main skills as she matured into being an apprentice, into being Batpaw.
Critique level | Criticize All Aspects of My Character